Talk:Dominic Vairo

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GA review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Dominic Vairo/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 17 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:09, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:09, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• His father was an immigrant from Italy, and a tenant at the Italian Hall when the Italian Hall disaster occurred.-->His father was an Italian immigrant and a tenant at the Italian Hall when the Italian Hall disaster occurred.
• You could link "South Pacific" to Pacific Ocean theater of World War II
• The last two paragraphs of the article have a lot of "He..." sentences. Can you try to mix a few up to remove some repetition?
• References:
  • All are formatted consistently and appear reliable for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 2, 6, 8, 10, 11, 12, 14 all check out

Nice work!. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:52, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:49, 21 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:51, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.