Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Business transformation management

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The result was delete. Wifione _.......^{Leave a message} 17:25, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Business transformation management

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This article was found to be copied from a web page, that is asserted to be freely licensed. Unfortunately, that page is now not reachable, nor can I find it elsewhere on their site. In any case, this is an unencyclopedic essay, written as a tutorial, . Based on the references, the term seems to be used only in a patent, and consultation reports based on it. I note the apparently related and wholly unsatisfactory article Business transformation. I have never found a good way of writing articles on business management concepts, but copying their jargon is not it. DGG ( talk ) 18:43, 30 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Delete if it was a widely used concept it would generate a lot of coverage. 4 gnews hits only. [1]. LibStar (talk) 05:04, 1 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Note: Step 3 of the AfD process was not completed properly. It has been fixed. —KuyaBriBri^Talk 19:49, 1 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Note: This debate has been included in the list of Business-related deletion discussions. -- • Gene93k (talk) 18:34, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Delete. Unencyclopedic, barely readable essay, annoyingly abstract and multiplying lists of buzzwords præter necessitatem in an attempt to lend false rigor, this is probably meant to promote a consulting business. - Smerdis of Tlön - killing the human spirit since 2003! 15:43, 4 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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