Template:Did you know nominations/Rhythm Heaven Groove
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Rhythm Heaven Groove
- ... that Japanese musician Tsunku will compose music for the rhythm video game Rhythm Heaven Groove without his vocal cords?
- ALT1: ... that Japanese musician Tsunku will compose music for a rhythm video game without his vocal cords? Source: https://www.ign.com/articles/rhythm-heaven-is-bopping-onto-nintendo-switch-at-long-long-last
- ALT2: ... that the composer for Rhythm Heaven Groove has had his vocal cords removed? Source: https://www.ign.com/articles/rhythm-heaven-is-bopping-onto-nintendo-switch-at-long-long-last
- ALT3: ... that despite removing his vocal cords due to laryngeal cancer, Japanese musician Tsunku will return to compose music for the next game in the Rhythm Heaven series, Rhythm Heaven Groove? Source: https://www.ign.com/articles/rhythm-heaven-is-bopping-onto-nintendo-switch-at-long-long-last
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- Comment: Hope I formatted it correctly!
Moved to mainspace by EvanTech10 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
EvanTech10 (talk) 01:27, 21 November 2025 (UTC).
- As the creator of the draft page, I don't feel comfortable actually reviewing this,, but I wanted to comment. I find the first hook stronger than the other two, but I do wonder if it could be gussied up more. Could it be tweaked to say that he departed the series due to his cancer before returning with Groove? - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 01:45, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
- Could it be like: ALT4: ... that despite removing his vocal cords due to laryngeal cancer, Japanese musician Tsunku will return to compose music for the next game in the Rhythm Heaven series, Rhythm Heaven Groove? Source: https://www.ign.com/articles/rhythm-heaven-is-bopping-onto-nintendo-switch-at-long-long-last - EvanTech10 (talk) 20:19, 27 November 2025 (UTC).
- Hello, and welcome to DYK. To answer your question, ALT3 is unlikely to be accepted due to being too long. DYK generally prefers shorter hooks as they are more likely to catch attention and be easier to read. I'm not sure if I will give this a review or not, but for now I would say that ALT1 is probably the best option here as it not only a shorter hook compared to ALT4 but also is not reliant on readers knowing about the game to find it interesting. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:43, 1 December 2025 (UTC)